I urgently need to paraphrase a text. The teacher does not accept my essay because he thinks that some sentences in it are not readable. Can you please tell me how to paraphrase them so that they do not lose their uniqueness, but at the same time become more understandable?

To be honest, I didn't have this at university, I always wrote texts perfectly, and if I saw that there were some flaws in them, I immediately changed them with the help of AI paraphraser - https://pr-cy.io/rewrite/. Thanks to it, you will not have to rephrase the text yourself, it will do it itself more qualitatively and quickly. I advise you to try it.